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| Chidori Nadare 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseIts meaning is so much in so little words. Second and third lines are my favorite. Well done. -C.N |
| simpleplan13 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseI really like this... the title in a different language is interesting and the piece itself is beautiful |
| Basara 2007-04-09 ch 1, | abusesweet... nice... |
| PocoSnow15 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuseWow! Great emotion in this! Passion full of sin...great last line. I mean, really great. It says so much in such short words. Awesome job! |