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nik_leo
2007-04-30
ch 1,
nice story

i would like to hear what is up next

bye!
lilmisssakura
2007-04-09
ch 1,
Aw...I must admit it has been a while since I have been on fictionpress, but when I saw you had your new story up I went "O Must read."

I like the first person perspective. I used to love writing in it myself, and then got all messed up when I tried to stop haha. But it came out really well :-) I can't wait to see the next part!
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2007-04-06
ch 1,
Hooray! I was hoping you would post this soon! It's a good premise for a story, I actually have something like it but have not decided whether or not I wanted to post it to FP. (I'll tell you about it sometime!)

There was some spelling mistakes here and there, nothing extreme and since English is your second language, it's very good! I am impressed by your language skills at such a young age, so kudos!!
I think my heart is going to bleed for Naoji. Actually, I know it will. He's my kind of adorable, utterly gay man turned wife. Haha! But he knows judo? Awesome!

First person stories can be hard, I'm changing a lot of what I've written because of it, so for a first time writing in this style, it's good. I hope you post the next chapter soon because I am in love with the potentially adorable fluff that can come out of this story! If you decide you ever want someone to look over your work to check for any errors, I'll be glad to help whenever.
Great job, post again soon!

-Prof. D
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