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Reviews For: Not of Dying

Nobody-n-Particular
2007-08-03
ch 1,
I think that everyone impacts someone, even if it's from a passing glance on the street. But that may simply be idealistic... :)
Melissa O'Day
2007-06-25
ch 1,
I'D REMEMBER YOU! The people you're helping in Colorado would remember you and hold you in their hearts!

Great all around writing!
--Sarah

(guess what? we're tied in story amounts now. 95 to 95! hah! YES!)
theatrical rhapsodies
2007-04-09
ch 1,
This poem, I can really relate to. I used to feel just like this. who would miss a person that hasn't done anything? A lot of people want to be missed, as did I. But, as i became older i realized that, I didnt really want to be missed. wonderful peom. The reader can tell by the way you wrote it that you really do feel this way, and that you aren't just making it up.

Love, Ellen
Ryustorm
2007-04-06
ch 1,
'should I be ripped from their grasp' certainly not. is my suggestion. lol. liked that line best.
... lol, i found it quite funny to be frank.
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