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| M. Edmondson 2007-06-28 ch 1, | Not bad but interesting. I think I like The Fool more though but nonetheless this was powerful. Simple but meaningful |
| soft-spoken 2007-04-06 ch 1, | Nice, short, to the point. It flowed as well. Good job, keep it up. |
| Twenty Nine 2007-04-06 ch 1, | This is ok. I'm not sure if you meant to spell World "Worl" Unless you didn't mean World, if so then I'm really sorry! |