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Reviews For: Twirl: The Games We Play

M. Edmondson
2007-06-28
ch 1,
Not bad but interesting. I think I like The Fool more though but nonetheless this was powerful. Simple but meaningful
soft-spoken
2007-04-06
ch 1,
Nice, short, to the point. It flowed as well.
Good job, keep it up.
Twenty Nine
2007-04-06
ch 1,
This is ok. I'm not sure if you meant to spell World "Worl" Unless you didn't mean World, if so then I'm really sorry!
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