I really like those last two lines and the alliteration in the title is great... I also really like the first two lines... the second line is definately me.. lol

The last line breaks my heart, it's a little angry and sad sounding at the same time.

so well said. the imagery is very strong and wonderful... simplisticly wonderful.

Wow, really love the first line here as well as the whole poem itself. Short, but awesome

I am in love with the first two lines. :)