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| I Murder on Impulse 2008-05-22 ch 23,  | abuseaw it was going great! please update! xx |
| Barts the Farts 2008-02-27 ch 23, | abuseThats pretty cool. I really enyoyed reading it, :) |
| dreamforever101 2008-01-13 ch 23, | abuseoh i wanna no what happens at the picnic!! update soon plz!! |
| dreamforever101 2008-01-13 ch 3, | abusehello its me again! in this chapter his eyes ARE labeled as green (i went back and checked) and that is the reason her memory is triggered...so bac to my question.. are his eyes blue or green? (and srry if im being annoying...its just one of those things where u just have to find out the answer in order to move on with life!!) :D |
| dreamforever101 2008-01-13 ch 15, | abusehey! this is a great story so far. well written and it has depth. just a little thing.. weren't Blake's eyes green?!?! like her kidnapper's.. b/c in this chapter they are suddenly blue! so which color are they? its one of those things i have to know!! :P |
| Dream that was Life 2008-01-05 ch 23, | abuseI read this story a while back, but I'm not sure if I'd reviewed it before. Just in case I haven't, it's really good. I hope you'll update it soon, I'd like to see how the picnic goes. All the characters are really sweet and likable, and I like how Lucy's reactions are realistic but romantic. R. |
| notreal17 2007-11-26 ch 23, | abusei love this story and would love to read more. please please please update!! |
| FabulousChick13 2007-10-15 ch 23, | abuseAwesome Story! Please Update Soon! xo.:Mandi:.xo |
| dreamtaker 2007-07-31 ch 23, | abuseI just had the same idea that they should go outside. lol I hope you keep updating this story! It's going great! |
| dreamtaker 2007-07-31 ch 21, | abuseaww, it was cute how this chapter ended. Lucy had realize there was someone who was caring. it's going great! |
| Delicacy of the Mind 2007-07-20 ch 23, | abuseeek! I love it!! I just read all 23 Chapters in 1/2 an hour! update soon pretty please! |
| I am the rebel angel 2007-06-21 ch 23, | abuseI really like the idea of this story. If you wanted to speed up the love process, try having Blake's Ex come and kiss him. Then Lucy gets all jealous and totally confronts him. Bam. they love each other, and have to keep their love secret. Just an idea. PLEASE don't stop writing this one, it's really good and I'm right in the middle of it. I am your fan. I am the rebel angel. |
| violet-rain 2007-05-30 ch 23, | abuseLovely... |
| valentinesquirt 2007-05-29 ch 23, anon. | abuseShe's beginning to like him!! More, please! |
| under the influence 2007-05-29 ch 23, | abuseI like how she's slowly warming up to him... |