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Reviews For: Handbags and GladWAGS

Panela
2008-07-05
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Okay, so I'm 99% sure you probably don't write anymore, nor check your account, but from one footie fan to another-- This is a great story. If you keep it up, it'll be a huge hit for sure. I think it was b/c most fictionpress kids are from America (like me) and aren't into soccer/football and don't understand the WAG culture in England or the clubs (Chelsea, Arsenal, Man U). HOWEVER, there are toonns of international kids and quite a few Americans (like me haha) who are obsessed w/ football and would no doubt fall in love if you kept writing. This is an incredible start- well-written and interesting with the whole foster kid deal.

If you can hear me (haha), I love this work and you should keep it up (if you still got the inspiration).

-Jenny
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