So now the question is was it REALLY charles, or that young, swell man with jet black hair and blue eyes who was quite a looker. Or maybe it was Karma-Charles. Anywho, this was a really cute one Sarah. I really like one shots just because they are so uncomplicated and can be so cute, and you just nail those two subjects down pat. great job! i luv it!

Aww. Cute story. I'm almost crying even though I hate one-shots. This is truly great.

Nice little Story! Made me feel both smiley and sad.

A suggestion: I've read Serve and love it. Honestly i'm not sure if i can be bothered to read another version of it, truth be told. No offense meant but once you've read a story you're eager to find out what happens next, not go back and re-read with a few differences. However if you do want to re-write, why not leave up the current version and simply write a redux. Myrika did this for her very popular story reason and romance as the newer version was very different from the original.

I'm crying. No kidding. this is so sweet. damn you for making me emotional. poor emily, but it really is very sweet.

Your story is amazing. I didn't pay much attention to grammatical issues, so I can not help you much in that department. But anyhow, I loved it.

That was an adorable story, although I did get a little confused when there was a guy asking for Emma, and then one asking for Emily.

Otherwise, it's excellent (and I'm not just saying that because my real name is Emily.)