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| Tadzio 2007-06-15 ch 1, | I was harsh in my first assessment of your work. Forgive me. I still see a trend, an underlying theme in your writings. You cast yourself as the victim but I wonder how many have felt victimized by you. |
| Edgar Wellington 2007-05-22 ch 1, | This story is effective. It is a nightmare. Julian the first appears and disappears, like all the emotions of the narrator. Its got a good mix of cinematic horror and realism. Its got just enough eroticism to bring it to the surface so it can be slapped back into the realm of horror. |