OH, this one was pretty nice. I liked this. (:

makes me smile.
thank you.

i dont even know where to start describing how much i love this! its like i read it & its /exactly/ me & my older sister, it just brings back so many memories & i can relate to it so much. Its a bit sad reading this as well though cos i dont really see her very much anymore. the last line is perfect, i love the spelling youve used in 'furever', & it really reminds me of 'You & Me Song' by the wannadies. & im rambling now but ill jsut say this poem made me smile & im defo favouriting it. keep writing. ~Bex xx

god this was cute (i love ice cream)

the last word made me smile and laugh; interesting formatting

This was so cute, and really sweet. I can see your affection for her. Great job.