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| paper bell 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseOH, this one was pretty nice. I liked this. (: |
| Tytherpol 2007-05-24 ch 1, | abusemakes me smile. thank you. |
| polka dots and addictions 2007-04-17 ch 1, | abusei dont even know where to start describing how much i love this! its like i read it & its /exactly/ me & my older sister, it just brings back so many memories & i can relate to it so much. Its a bit sad reading this as well though cos i dont really see her very much anymore. the last line is perfect, i love the spelling youve used in 'furever', & it really reminds me of 'You & Me Song' by the wannadies. & im rambling now but ill jsut say this poem made me smile & im defo favouriting it. keep writing. ~Bex xx |
| burning in effigy 2007-04-06 ch 1, | abusegod this was cute (i love ice cream) the last word made me smile and laugh; interesting formatting |
| Ashelin 2007-04-06 ch 1, | abuseThis was so cute, and really sweet. I can see your affection for her. Great job. |