Hey not bad, I find it quite interesting. :D You should keep writing!

LOL NAUGHTY BUT NICE STORY. IS MORE COMING OF THIS

that was interesting. please update soon. i like it.

AH! that was so great! Keep going this sounds like it could be good. Just try not be predictable and have someone interupt them or something like that, too many writers have already done that...Well keep it up...looking forward to your next chapters.

) Shelby

She really has this guy in the palm of her hand, so to speak, doesn't she?

Cool story so far!