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| fatbird33 2008-08-26 ch 1,   | oh so sad. i like your explanation at the end. love the word choice of **. usually people use swears where they aren't nessescary. thanks for using it where it is |
| whaley 2008-07-08 ch 1, | you have no idea what it's like to be alone |
| K.K. Phoenix 2008-04-27 ch 1, | Oh lord, wow! Are you talking about me? I swear this is how I've been feeling for months upon months. Muy excellente ^_^ And all so sad at the same time. |
| Daughter of the Faeries 2007-09-28 ch 1, | Wow...I know how that goes. Great job! |
| Hells-a-singing 2007-06-18 ch 1, | OMG this is so true! I love how you write things in only three lines!...AND thanks for the awsome reveiw on my poems *hugs* |
| j'aimejohnstamosilesttresch... 2007-06-12 ch 1, | nice...its so sad and lonely... |
| Jodi147 2007-04-30 ch 1, | Love the choice of words. :) |
| SirScott 2007-04-24 ch 1, | The acid thoughts remind me of heart burn. ~SirScott |
| Princess-anna57 2007-04-24 ch 1, | Sad haiku! :( I completely understand. Always be positive and keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| mindOFdeliriousUNREST 2007-04-17 ch 1, | love this, it's beautiful. know the feeling all too well. i'm an unfortunate sufferer of 3:30 A.M. syndrome- in normal english that means i have a habbit of waking up at 3:30 and thinking of all the things that really upset me instead of putting me to sleep. HUGS! paz, -the delirious one |
| carousel chorus 2007-04-17 ch 1, | This is a very short and hard hitting peice. Amazing job, you have a LOT of talent. Thanks so much for your reveiw, it means the world! ~PottersSweetie17 |
| Alexandra Stevens 2007-04-16 ch 1, | Thank you for your review. I like this. My favorite type of poems always have rather clever one liners. "Lonely nights and acid thoughts." I like it. I should like to constructively critisize, but how does one critisize something of such simplicity? I think the beauty of poetry is how it can seem so simplicit (is that a word?) but really be deep and powerful. Right. Now take out all the fancy language and you get "I like this." =] |
| ten bucks and a tire 2007-04-16 ch 1, | You say so much in so few words. That's a gift. :) |
| waitandhope 2007-04-15 ch 1, | "Acid thoughts" - so true. :) |
| recycle rhymes 2007-04-14 ch 1, | yeah i can definitely relate. keep on going! |