oh so sad. i like your explanation at the end. love the word choice of **. usually people use swears where they aren't nessescary. thanks for using it where it is

you have no idea what it's like to be alone

Oh lord, wow! Are you talking about me? I swear this is how I've been feeling for months upon months. Muy excellente ^_^ And all so sad at the same time.

Wow...I know how that goes. Great job!

OMG this is so true! I love how you write things in only three lines!...AND thanks for the awsome reveiw on my poems *hugs*

nice...its so sad and lonely...

Love the choice of words. :)

The acid thoughts remind me of heart burn.

~SirScott

Sad haiku! :( I completely understand. Always be positive and keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^

love this, it's beautiful. know the feeling all too well. i'm an unfortunate sufferer of 3:30 A.M. syndrome- in normal english that means i have a habbit of waking up at 3:30 and thinking of all the things that really upset me instead of putting me to sleep. HUGS!
paz,
-the delirious one

This is a very short and hard hitting peice. Amazing job, you have a LOT of talent.

Thanks so much for your reveiw, it means the world!
~PottersSweetie17

Thank you for your review. I like this. My favorite type of poems always have rather clever one liners. "Lonely nights and acid thoughts." I like it. I should like to constructively critisize, but how does one critisize something of such simplicity? I think the beauty of poetry is how it can seem so simplicit (is that a word?) but really be deep and powerful. Right. Now take out all the fancy language and you get "I like this." =]

You say so much in so few words. That's a gift.

:)

"Acid thoughts" - so true.

:)

yeah i can definitely relate. keep on going!