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| Lunar Eclipse1 2007-04-10 ch 1,   | I love that you sum it up with "Algebra". It's like I got this moment of "Oh"; "Oh ya... algebra is trying alright!" You fit the structure well, I'm sure English teachers would be pleased... though your algebra teacher would probably prefer the math of the shape of the poem... Anyways, nice job! |