This is really good. I liked how you expressed Tate's feelings on worshipping. Keep it up!


-C.N

P.S. Thank you for the review

Cool beginning of a story! I liked how you expressed Tate's feelings towards worshipping and such. It made it so easy to see what kind of person he is. I liked his brief conversation with his mother. It made it easier to see how much they believe. Great job with this first chapter! Keep it up and update soon!
The Reverse Edge Blade