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| sneekie 2008-05-08 ch 1,   | that was an interesting piece, was that scripted/inspired by something true. Anyway it was a lovely piece |
| multiples of six 2007-11-06 ch 1, | This is well-written, and very sweet! =) |
| ICaughtFire 2007-10-04 ch 1, | Aw that was so cute. I wish my mom was that accepting too. Actually my mom DOES know but she pretends she doesn't. It's tiring. Good job with this, adding it to my favorites. |
| Jessica Pryce 2007-06-19 ch 1, | *smiling* I like this a lot. |
| Laure Cartier 2007-05-23 ch 1, | Oh I love this story! It's so cute! |
| Knightmare Elite 2007-04-07 ch 1, | Aw, what a sweet story. I'm glad when parents can accept their children, or at least give a true effort as in Jennifer's case. The story had such an innocent gloss over it, especially in the descriptions of the 'act'. By the way I must say you detailed excellently, while at the same time capturing the emotions on both sides while never making it sleazy or perverted. You're a really great writer! And a someone once told me. 'You better keep writing these one shots!' |
| x.kirai.x 2007-04-07 ch 1, | hi. is this finished? - cuz u sed its a oneshot. it seems good so far, and i lyk the way u write. keep up! |