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soccer diva 2008-08-19 ch 24,	abuseHey there! Bet you thought I had abandoned you. :) Never fear, I have returned...and I don't have any criticism at all. Everything was perfectly lovely, and I love how rosaline finally warmed up to Nicholas (both sides of him). You handled that very well. As for the epilogue itself, I'm not really sure what I think. I mean, I liked it-a LOT. I thought that ending it with her finally letting him feed from her was very symbolic of how she had completely let down all her walls with him. It confirmed what you had written with words. However, I also liked how in the last epilogue, you had them get married, and then bonded afterwords, saying how it was a much more simple, but much more intimate ceremony. I thought that really indicated how she had assimilated into vampiric life, and showed how much it meant to her over her old life. So both epilogues had their good points, to me, and I don't know which I would choose over the other, exactly. I think this one, but the other one certaintly had its merits. Ah bah, don't listen to me. You did an amazing job, and I think that it is definitely publish worthy! I would go with Duty Bound simply because it doesn't imply any specific ending. Both title have the same ring to them, so one doesn't SOUND better than the other. It just depends on what you want the title to imply. So there is my two cents in the jar, congratulations on finishing! I hope you are happy with this version!:)
BluNyghtLeo 2008-08-17 ch 24,	abuseThat was absolutely thrilling and breathing, I felt the emotions the characters were giving and it still had some funny parts "I loved it!", I enjoyed it very very much =D I'm still working those pictures but forgive me my laptop decided not to turn on after a while, I'm using my father's lol But more to come.
AEJ325 2008-08-15 ch 2,	abuseHmm, Rosaline is a lilttle to "go-with-the-flow" for me, but alas thus is what this time period calls for.
AEJ325 2008-08-15 ch 1,	abuseHey, I like it so far. You should most deffinatly try to publish it. Theres one thing that popped out at me. Your use of "softly" it's not a big deal or anything, but I since you asked I thought I would respond. I just noticed that you used it a couple of times close together, you might want to find a different word, or not... lol. Can't wait to read more!
xxxTwilightPrincessxxx 2008-08-14 ch 24,	abusefinally im done this story! wow! it is an really good story! i luved it!! i couldnt even stop reading it. anyway i juss luv the character nicholas!
BlueFairy61 2008-08-12 ch 5,	abusegoddam, im like...officially in luv wit ur story :)
For What Its Worth 2008-08-07 ch 24,	abuseThat was awesome. I would have liked to see how her parents reacted to 1) her new scar, 2) her new attitude, personality, and confidence, 3)her new wardrobe. Oh, and not to mention her obvious love of the terrible Dragon. Are you going to make a sequel? I was surprised Amil didn't bring his bondmate to live in the Nest, though. He loves the place, appreciates Nicholas' way of life, and has to pretend to be a half-blood where he is. Ah, well. The story is awesome just as it is. :)
MamiPapi 2008-08-05 ch 24,	abusethis was an amazing story and kept me riveted all throughout! Hope it does get published like you want it to. I'm hopin the same for mine too thought i havent yet finished it:)
Cylara 2008-08-04 ch 24,	abuseI really love this story, and this ending was very well done. It fit very well with the rest of the story and broght everything together without feeling rushed or tacked on at all. Great job!
Iuyina 2008-08-03 ch 12,	abuseWonderful Story! It's a page turner! (wait, maybe scroller would be more appropriate here...) I congratulate you!
Rizzy 2008-08-01 ch 24,	abuseHAHA i totally was expecting a lemon =X I LOVE this story to death. I'm glad everything worked out, though I feel it is left unfinished? I'm gushing for a sequel haha. But other than that this is a fantastic piece of literature! I really do hope you DO get published. I will be the first one to buy your book.
Ck90 2008-08-01 ch 24,	abuseKYA! That was so beautiful. He bit her! It was so Awsome! I loved the story from the start! They love each other! Okay I'm going to stop gushing and just congratulate you on te great job that I think you did on the story. I hopw you do get published i would totally buy it! and I actually prefer the tittle bonded, becauese eventhoug she was Duty bound to leave with him well he gave her a choice. but then again the tittle Duty Bound can represent her duty not only as a Princess but as a Mate so they both hold a piece of the story! CONGRATULATIONS!
Asyriel Shadow Jaspar 2008-08-01 ch 24,	abuseThat was beautiful! I couldn't imagine a better ending.
raped by a female bunni 2008-08-01 ch 24,	abusehehe.wat u think of the name my friend got pissed off so i have 2 change it...again...i love it the ending is way better!!
kris89 2008-07-31 ch 24, anon.	abuseits too bad about the fact that they cant have any children. im surprised that neither of the two said anything about that.

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