Reviews for Smell of Rain - FictionPress.com

MarvellousMarvin 2007-05-16 ch 1,	abusethat was beautiful. there were so many lines i loved - the angels with the fists was so haunting and the last two lines were beautiful. it's really effective having the tears on its own line as it really emphasises it. everyone's been writing about the rain! it's a good topic, this is one of the good ones!
Melanie Layugan 2007-04-26 ch 1,	abuseO_o. I'm speechless. In a good way. Will need some time to think. Oh.. Blue you've captured the dark sound of rain. Keep it up. Melanie
say this sooner 2007-04-20 ch 1,	abuseoh wow, i love this. great work, a favorite for sure.
Aquafied 2007-04-09 ch 1,	abusesoftsoft rain i think it is raining right now
FunkyFlower17 2007-04-07 ch 1,	abusei like the use of onomatopoea in this. it is well written although i wouldnt personally write that the rain trickles across her face like tears, bcuz it seems contradictory to me. after all, you're saying that rain is soothing her bruises, but usually, tears represent pain, so how can rain be soothing and in one sense - painful - at the same time? anyway, i liked the overall feel of it ;) take care, ~mez~