That was an awesome story! I loved it. It was exactly my kind of story, what with all the sarcasm and everything. I love sarcasm. It's awesome! I also like the whole jerk-turned-nice-and-everything thing. Great story!

update soon?!...i love alex and his friends

Aw great story! Is it finished? Or more?

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is that the end? coz you havent updated in like ages.. it'd be nice to see more of alex and kalyn,,coz this doesn't look quite 'wrapped up' just yet..
otherwise its a cool story!

I liked it. The way you wrote it is original.

- l0v3abl3

Great story. I really enjoyed. It was really funny. Keep writing. :D

I liked the story. A lot. I'm fan of your other story also, but this one was interesting. I just kinda am a bit disappointed that Alex wasn't able to man up and say how he truly felt, which he already knew. But nonetheless. GREAT JOB!

i don't know why i like this. hahah.
but i do.

This was good, but it's kind of liike it's going just alittle fast. but anytway i really liked it.

pls update.

aw it's good that they wanna work it out!

OMFG I love this! I'm being totally sincere btw. Alex is a bastard but he's still so cute! Kalyn kicks ** ... thank god she's not a typical high school girl! WOO! Yeah, anyway, UPDATE ASAP!!

aw cute! i knew there was a reason nathan didn't seem so happy to be with her still... and drea said yes- so much for him going to hell. update soon please!

please tell me this isnt the end! *gasp*

Hey

I wanted to say nice cliffhanger! But also to point out that, although I was/am very impressed with your writing skills, that a last look at the chapter might be in order. Only small things, mostly an awkward phrasing. For example:
'In their year of Nathan' when I'm sure you meant 'In their year of dating, Nathan never...'
Simple stuff like that. Otherwise, I'm on the edge of my seat!
But I have a story out too, Of Moonlight and Shadows. I'd love to have a review from a fellow writer!!