oh wow that was so tragic. Beautifully written though, and I loved it.

I really liked Fayvel...and felt so bad for him. :(

I wasn't expecting that ending though. ;-;

xo

it has the nonsensical feeling of being incomplete. >< and maybe that's what endears it to me. it's an interesting concept, and i'm giving thought to maybe run with it someday, if you'd allow me?

That was so sad!