Reviews for Like a Phoenix - FictionPress.com

derik 2007-04-10 ch 1,	that was a pretty good poem... IF YOU LIKE PUKING! hahaha
Nemonus 2007-04-08 ch 1,	Pretty nice. The chorus has a calm rhythm to it that I can hear as a song. In other parts the rhythm jolts a little, but only in a few. "so we wouldn't have to" I think could be replaced with something more fitting and less vague or cliché. Throughout the poem the physical descriptions are good; I get the overarching picture of the optimistic phoenix very clearly. Tis a nice celebration peace for Eastertime.
mobman 2007-04-07 ch 1,	brilliant metaphors. I liked it, and Im not even that religious! keep it up Mob
Orual 2007-04-07 ch 1,	I tend to think that the phoenix from the ashes metaphor is overused, but it worked well for this piece. I love the parallels you draw and how you compare both Christ and Christians to the phoenix. "We will shake off the ashes / Of our previous life" expecially caught my attention. Very nice work. I enjoyed this piece.