wow. impressive and powerful ending there. i like the unabashedness of it. if that's a word. :)

nice last two lines, haha.

i esp. liked the bitter edge.

That was really good, very dramatic.

Oh wow! This was so good! I loved your style! It sounds like something I was going through a short time ago... The ending really pulled it together, with the please don't forget part, really awesome. Great job!