FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| The Paperback Mummy 2007-04-08 ch 1,  | abusewow. impressive and powerful ending there. i like the unabashedness of it. if that's a word. :) |
| i call it laughable 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abusenice last two lines, haha. i esp. liked the bitter edge. |
| Victorian La Bella 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good, very dramatic. |
| PocoSnow15 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! This was so good! I loved your style! It sounds like something I was going through a short time ago... The ending really pulled it together, with the please don't forget part, really awesome. Great job! |