...You know, I've read this story six times and every single time, I feel inspired to write something magnificent. This is the story that made me want to create a FictionPress account and write something people will remember. I have yet to achieve that, but I'm determined to create something truly incredible. I just would like to thank you for inspiring me the way you have. The Shelter is one of my favorites (10 times better then The Road by Cormac McCarthy I think). Thank you. I can honestly say that reading your writing has helped made me into who I am today.

~P7

Okay, I'm not sure why I've never commented before seeing as how I've read this story through four times now since I found it. I really like how you focus on them, on Raelin/Helene and Davie and that's, well, pretty much it. So it's a post apocalyptic world and she was made in a lab, pft, who cares? That could so easily have gone so wrong but I personally think you managed to pull it off.

It's all matter of fact and intriguing and plain and GOOD and I'm not sure what else to say. Thumbs up, buddy.

Another good story. You are very talented at portraying relationships. There were some awkward phrases in this story, but since I can't mark on the sheet as I read, I've forgotten where they are. Thank you for another good story.