Reviews for The Opression - FictionPress.com

Insane plus Insomniac makes... 2007-06-16 ch 1,	You should continue this.
Amethystasheryn 2007-04-16 ch 1,	Wow. I'm impressed. How did you manage to fit all that into a shortstory? If I'd tried that, I'd have ended up with a chaptered story, not a oneshot like that. I liked it. I still can't figure out what side Sally was on, though...I suppose she was really just trying to survive, but did she KNOW that Luella would destroy the empress, or was she just trying to keep the empress happy by bringing her what she wanted? Or does it depend on how the reader looks at it? (I supose all stories depend on how the reader looks at them, but whatever.)
Casey Drake 2007-04-15 ch 1,	...ok, that can't be the end... or it could, but I'd want to know what the consequences are. Does someone want revenge, or want her to take the Imperial throne, or save another world, or what? And why is she called the Cougar? :D CD
Taltush/MeiMei 2007-04-07 ch 1,	This is an interesting story. I like how it's written, and I found it pretty cool. It's not too over the top, but it stills has something special to it. Even though the story is short, I feel like I know the characters. Great job.