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| Hunter Brown 2007-04-07 ch 1,   | I definitely know the feeling. I live alone in my apartment and this happens all the time. Good deal. Check my stuff sometime. |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-04-07 ch 1, | I think everyone can relate to this poem. It's written in an interesting fashion. I actually feel like it's too short to really feel what it's like, but overall it's good. |
| PocoSnow15 2007-04-07 ch 1, | Yeah, I have plenty of those moments! I love the second verse, imagaination of ghost, but the third verse describes me really, really well. I love how you summed it up at the end, left a huge impression on me! Awesome job! |
| Kissing Concrete 2007-04-07 ch 1, | I like this. The image of the mysteriousness of shadows is not very original, but the way you wrote it shows a lot of creativity. The one thing i would change would be the last lines of the 1st and 2nd stanzas- i dont like the questions. The last line is the best of the poem |