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| You know who 2007-04-12 ch 4,  | oh uh... she doesn't seem too happy. Hmm... where does this plot seem familer from ? (smirks) Nice hun! |
| royalnavy 2007-04-09 ch 1,  | Well written, there is good fluidity and good ensight on the main character. Though there could be a bit more description of the locations. |