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| AuthoressCharlie 2008-06-27 ch 1, | I like it so write the next chapter. ~Charlie |
| Rainbowelectric 2008-04-10 ch 1, | contrary to someone's belief, you know for a high school creative writing student (I'm not gonna point any fingers or mention any names) but this doesn't suck out loud. Quite to the contrary, you ably fleshed out your characters, giving them depth and unique qualities that can only be described as endearing. I'm looking forward, a great deal, to more. You have great dialogue and interaction between your characters as well. All in all, I'd say it's going to be wonderful. |