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| Laie 2008-11-21 ch 1,   | I loved this! So bittersweet! *-* ...on another note, I also skip a lot of classes ·_· If I had a smexy boyfriend like Fletch, I'd gladly go with him, though... xD |
| iLoveHuggles 2008-02-26 ch 1, | Oh my, I love that last line. Likable characters with their own flaws, witty humor, and an all around good story. I loved the narration and how the twosome's relationship was slowly revealed as the story wore on. Lovely work! :3 |
| Devil's Playground 2007-11-05 ch 1, | I really like this. It's so adorable, and the ending is absolutely perfect. You could probably even turn this concept into a longer story if you ever felt like it. Awesome job! |
| cheeseboi 2007-10-07 ch 1, | Aww! I love the realistic humour in this fic! It's so cute *gushes* Keep up the amazing work. =)!! I'll be reading this over and over again later. HAha. |
| Ladybugg13 2007-09-09 ch 1, | aw. Thats really sweet. or. not sweet. I mean. Like, emotional sweet, not chocolate sweet. hehehe. -Bugg |
| Yasuzoma 2007-07-31 ch 1, | wow I loved reading this :) usually i just skip some lines etc., but i kept reading this throughout ace work!! the insults made it a lot more believable |
| magalina 2007-07-28 ch 1, | wow... that was different :) Loved it. Amazing job. |
| cynth ballerina 2007-07-05 ch 1, | That was pretty amazing~ I definitely enjoyed it and was so frustrated when Ajay was being mean. |
| Dreaming.of.Tomorrow 2007-07-03 ch 1, | That was cute... if that is the right word to use, lol. Anyway, it was a good one-shot^^ I liked the way you ended it, for one reason or another. |
| KissMyConverse 2007-06-26 ch 1, | This story is too cute for words. =] I loved it. |
| deuteriuM Xtreme 2007-06-06 ch 1, | 'And that was our friendship, that was us — split into an individual u and s.' Yep, it was playful and careless [and sarcastic], but it got a wee bit thoughtful at the end. But it's still makes a great light read. (: [Actually I had in mind a story that revolves around a florist's son and the flower shop, haha. Those interesting families and their boys... xD] |
| ricco-the-penguin 2007-06-02 ch 1, | I like this a lot. very interesting. :D |
| roxaroni 2007-05-07 ch 1, | ...lol ur usern4me sux. Change it. My god at least take off the jarring capitals. How how how 'bout... hm 태? It's "tae" in korean and if you don't have asian language on it's a box and how awesome would it be to have a box as a username? >8D huh-huh? YEAH I KNOW GENIUS. ... Oh yeah and story's good, you know like usual. |
| Kailum 2007-04-10 ch 1, | Lol nice. Your style of writing reminds me of the author/book we're doing in english class right now. East West by Rushdie. Heard of it before? It's cuz he sorta reveals things bit by bit, slowly letting you know more, and then at the end it's like OH I GET IT! sort of thing. Your story did sorta the same thing with the whole, revealing they know each other more than the readers think they do. Yay, good job |
| no account 2007-04-08 ch 1, | awesome story. i love the fact that your characters are flawed makes them more than one-dimensional. excellent. |