Reviews for Butterfly Girl - FictionPress.com

Kissan Silma 2007-06-09 ch 1,	abuseOh! This is my favorite from you so far! Adds to favorite author's list. I had very interesting images in my head while reading this, butterfly's for one and a girl in the other. Your laungage was powerful, and I love how the poem tells a story, with an awesome ending. I really liked it, keep writing!
Undrahas 2007-04-08 ch 1,	abusewow. this was really good.
Anonymous 2007-04-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseI noticed in your profile you said Kavita means poem in Hindu...yeah, no. It means poem in Hindi. A Hindu is a person who practices the religion of Hinduism. Your poem is pretty good.
Guardrail 2007-04-08 ch 1,	abuseThis is so beautifully written. I love the metaphor of the butterfly, and the imagry throughout is great. I love the emotion in this piece. Very powerful. Great work, I really like this a lot. Keep writing!
Jordygirl 2007-04-07 ch 1,	abuseThat is beautiful. It made me want to cry. Seriously.