Reviews for Eternal Wings - FictionPress.com

Kier Haliana 2007-04-10 ch 3,	abuseThis is getting better and better. Heh, Adonis was comical. "I have my way with men" - something that my friend would tell people. Ah, this chapter was a good early morning jump start.
Kier Haliana 2007-04-08 ch 2,	abuseKristopher reminds me of one of my friends. Physically I mean. So...where are those men taking him? Hmm...post the next part soon! I would like to read more. I thought you'd like to know that I reposted my story under a different name. It's called "Escaping Abhorrence." Talk to you later!
Kier Haliana 2007-04-07 ch 1,	abuseThere are only two things I saw wrong with the story. 1: You switched from past tense to present tense multiple times. 2: Commas...but that's a normal thing. Everyone forgets commas. Other than that it seems interesting. It was too short to really develop a good opinion but it's not bad.