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queenlucy25
2007-04-10
ch 1,
abuseWow. That's all I can say. Not only did you capture the lyrics, you captured the situation perfectly. I'm kinda sensitive to that particular subject because it's something I've been through (and you may notice it's a theme in a lot of the stuff I write). There were a lot of phrases in there that grabbed my attention. Wonderful job.
emsrambles
2007-04-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, that was really amazing. You really captured the lyrics of the song. Nice!

Santi!
HelloLonely
2007-04-10
ch 1,
abuseJust for a kick of it, I'd like to say I really like Amanda's idea of submiting it to the band. It'd be pretty cool to show them how you interpretted or figured out the song and put it to a story. I know I would like it if I was in a band and someone did that (:

Anywho, I thought this story was very beautiful. You made it realistic and definitely a real-life situation many people face. I can't really say much...but this story is defnitely a favorite :) Lovely job!

Seed is one of my favorite songs, hehe. And then it's Everything We Had. ^^
Amanda
2007-04-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseI think this was really quite good. It really illustrating Seed, which is one of my favorite songs. You should try submitting it to the band. And, if you have anything else written I'd like to read it.
Svelte
2007-04-10
ch 1,
abuseThat was so deep. So beautiful. Probably the best, most realistic story I've ever found on fictionpress.
Great job.
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