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| she smolders 2007-04-22 ch 2,  | abuseThe last line breaks my heart. I wish love didn't have to hurt. Take care. |
| she smolders 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseYour poem is so beautiful and so touching at the same time. |
| xx-cronopio-xx 2007-04-10 ch 2, | abuseDAMN. Pardon me, but sometimes nothing but expletives will do. I sense there's a story behind this that I don't quite understand, but that doesn't matter because the language is so melodic, forceful and sincere - lush and poetic. You don't use a word that isn't needed. You also possess a singular capacity for juxtaposing such "colloquial" expressions as "and my ** hands" with lyrical elements like "It's not pity I want - It's damnation. I never want to see the sun again." So gorgeous that a case history isn't needed - the poem stands firmly and erectly on its own. Adieu - Kat. |
| sin olvido 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuseHoly imagery! I'm at a loss for words other than that. |