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| xanthofile 2007-05-16 ch 1, | abusethis has been sitting in my inbox for ages. finals has given me the free time (that i should be using to study) to go through and read everything i've been putting on hold for what i call "the sucky real life". the visuals were awesome, yeah...there's a difference here from your early writings, and that's remarkable in and of itself. ^^ |
| magalina 2007-04-08 ch 1, | abuseNice start! Can`t wait for more :) |
| Jough 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuseyou know, i read this twice before commenting on it, but youve done a great job capturing the dream state, as well as an odd kind of first person narrative. very well done :) |