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| Moondog Dozier 2007-05-11 ch 1,   | I like how the easy flow mesmerizes the reader into the specific beat and pattern that brings out the audibility of this. The scene created helps the reader connect with the specifics, and makes the reader truly think about the undercurrents that intermingle as well. Very interesting. Good write. |
| Lucid Nonsense 2007-04-20 ch 1, | Interesting piece, the refrain is thought-provoking and ties the whole poem together. Very nice! And btw, you were very accurate in your assessment of my poem as "sad story of the shy girl at prom told by the girl herself" :) Well, it was a bit fictionalized, but mostly autobiographical. |
| burning in effigy 2007-04-07 ch 1, | reminds me of those big fluffy dice that people hang in there cars. love the feeling i get when i read this; a little calm but also anxious at the same time i'll never look at those things you hang in cars the same way ever again. :) |