Awsome rhythm. I like how the beginning hints at hate or bad feeling towards whoever 'you' is but then lets it go, doesn't care anymore. (hey I think I'm turning you into a depressing writer woot! lol)

i like but it might sound better if you said but in loathe not loathing...just a flowing thingy (haha im giving U advice :-D)

this one is depressing, i like it, first the happy tone than the sad, depressed tone. is this the 2nd part to "Drowning"?