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Reviews For: Season of Decay
soft-spoken
2007-04-08
ch 1, 		abuse"Fingertips curled in ageless dust," i loved that line, and enjoyed the ending very much.
bittersweet. i liked it a lot.
good job, keep it up and take care.
Taltush/MeiMei
2007-04-08
ch 1, 		abuseIt's not particularly original, but it's done nicely. The rhymes aren't too forced, which is good. Not incredible, but good.
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