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Anushka
2008-05-12
ch 3,
abuseGod...I downloaded all of the chapters and read your story. When is your exams finishing? I love the storyline and hate the fact that I can't read it all in one go. Please update v. son. I think that she is going to fall for Nathan, and then before she can tell Jason, he is going to tell her of his undying love. then she is going to be confused on how to choose between the two guys. she then probably will choose nathan, because she doesn't want to jeopardize her relationship with jason, so he gets upset. then nathan, might, pull a cheating spell and after a lot of hue and cry, she'll go for jason. happily ever after. am I right? Let me know.

Anushka
Julianne118
2008-04-15
ch 3,
abuselove it. :)
watever-floats-cc
2008-04-11
ch 3,
abuseYour story is very good and it has some description, but i think it needs more description on the girls and annett, more then the boys, you really dp need to finish the story it's going really good so far =)
phoebe
2008-04-04
ch 3, anon.
abuseplease right more i want to know whats gonna happen other than that i luurrve it
nikky196
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abusethis is realy good :)
glamoureste
2008-03-23
ch 3,
abuseWOAH woah woah UPDATE...
oh my god.. this story is going to be amazinng!

great job, and update soon please!
darkgurl92
2008-03-16
ch 3,
abuseinteresting..at this point i'm thinking jason is the main guy right...update soon..
Janine
2008-02-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat Story!

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frackandbonechick
2008-02-24
ch 3,
abuseI really like this story so far, and can't wait to see where you take it.

Please continue it soon

Cheers
Michelle
miss-blackhair
2007-11-29
ch 1,
abusehey i like this story! its pretty light hearted and i adore your style of writing. the story's pretty reader-friendly, if you get what i mean. there's not much long paragraphs that can make the words jump out of the blue. great job!(:
Aarushi
2007-09-21
ch 1,
abuse*ahem*

FINALLY located your story [Just had to add "spinelesslysweet" to my favorite authors list eheh.] lol.

Okayy..I LOVE THIS. Totally, absolutely, completely LOVE it. I'm a HUGE Jason/Annet shipper so I'm hoping they'll end up together. *crosses fingers*. But lets see what happens with Nathan..maybe I'll start liking him better later on?

Annet is so adorable! I lovee the humour in your story, it's original and refreshing.

Okay I gotta say something though, I kinda like Christina and her bitchness hahaha =D

WRITE MORE...this is your first priority as soon as exams are over...IT BETTER BE!

Aaru

xoxox
Purity of Light
2007-08-25
ch 3,
abuseWow I'm so confused...will she fall for Nathan, or will she fall for Jason?

I can clearly tell Jason likes her. And I think Nathan likes her as well.

But other than that I haven't got the foggiest idea.

Update soon!
Good plot and such. Barely any grammatical errors, too.
Carmel March
2007-08-25
ch 3,
abuseGreat, great chapter!

Due to my current state of brain-dead-ness, I can't think of anything more intelligent to say, except that I loved this, and I'll be waiting for your next update :)

~Carm~
Carmel March
2007-06-02
ch 2,
abuseLovely- I simply adore the way you narrate this story. You blend the characters' actions and dialogue with descriptions perfectly. I'm already gripped to this story. I can't wait for more!

~carm~
Jool
2007-06-01
ch 2, anon.
abuseLove this story. Some errors, but they're easily overlooked by your story telling. The characters are very interesting. Only one question: What does Annett look like? I don't think I missed a description. Eagerly awaiting next chapter. Thanks for sharing. Jool
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