Reviews for Sleeping Beauty, Revised

R.Hikari 2007-04-10 ch 1,	abuseGreat story...XD Loved it. Now if only -I- can think of something interesting...
Le Soleil Avant le Crepuscu... 2007-04-09 ch 1,	abuseThat was... hilarious. But awsome. Hooray for cross-dressing fairies! I can't believe you thought you couldn't write, you're way better than me! >> Angsts The only creative criticism(It's like an oxymoron... XD) that I can give you is please make seperate paragraphs after dialogue, it makes it easier to read. Oh, and less question marks. You only need one. ^^ Other than that, fantastic! Welcome to the world of people who post things on fictionpress! Your first try was far better than mine... >> ~Soleil
Kier Haliana 2007-04-08 ch 1,	abuseThat was funny. Crossdressing fairies rock!
Katja de Wit 2007-04-08 ch 1,	abuseThat was actually quite funny. :P I especially liked the part about crossdressing fairies and the forks being melted into bodyjewellery. The narrative could use a bit of work; a few question marks too many etc. Small things, but still. Overall, great job! ~Katja