|Reviews for Pharaoh|
| Guest 2/11/13 . chapter 7
You used the words barbarian which is Greek and Pleb which is latin when Iset was talking. Any way by the time rome was expanding Egypt was in control of the Ptolomey's who were Greek.
| paint my spirit gold 12/30/12 . chapter 11
:) I still love this story! Good job!
| paint my spirit gold 12/30/12 . chapter 7
Again; I trust none of your characters except for Nari. She seems legit :3
| paint my spirit gold 12/29/12 . chapter 5
Oohh, I'm suspicious of all of these little guys in your story! It's like...I know somebody is lying, but I can't put my finger on who that is...Anyways, Kraos is weak, Iset is a manipulating bitch and Nari is just sad. Have I mentioned that this is REALLY GOOD?
| paint my spirit gold 12/29/12 . chapter 4
Hello! I love this story! It's absolutely wonderful, so far. I commend you for all of your researching, and I'm wondering if Tor is from Rome...You know, because of Latium and all. Oh well, that was just a guess! Good work!
| ebbtide1120 7/22/12 . chapter 26
How many more chapters in this story? I just want to know do I can come back when the next book starts. Great story! It's really interesting. Definitely supports the suspense genre. :)
| Guest 7/1/12 . chapter 26
Another lovely chapter as always...please update soon!
| Alex Rashid 6/11/12 . chapter 25
Yay! you updated! I loved this chapter. :D keep on writing! :)
| Ioga 2/6/12 . chapter 24
I like this twisting and turning, Iset's downward spiral was broken just before it got too depressing. And we got a glance at more of Tor's approach to local politics, hee hee! I also like the subtler, not in-your-face wickedness side of Panya, with the furniture shifting and all. And Nari shows a bit of spirit too, if only after Iset pulled her into it. A nice couple of chapters, all in all!
Thanks for this!
| Ioga 1/6/12 . chapter 22
Oh, it looks like I should grab myself an update! Haven't I reviewed this chapter yet either?
I've been rather liking the development of Iset of late, as her position gets more unstable and we get to live in some horror besides all the frustrated self-overestimation and suchlike.
Thanks for this!
| Alex Rashid 12/13/11 . chapter 24
AHHH! Iset! Poison? UPDATE SOON? I love this story!
| Alex Rashid 12/11/11 . chapter 19
Aww...that was sweet. :)
| Alex Rashid 12/11/11 . chapter 18
I LOVE THIS STILL!
And i was surprised at Halima. She is scetchy...XD
| Alex Rashid 12/11/11 . chapter 16
Kraos shoulda punched a slave. XD
| Alex Rashid 12/9/11 . chapter 10
This is good. Long chapters. My stories don't have long chapters. My readers are suggesting that I make the chapters longer. I just stop them because I reach a cliff hanger. any suggestions? PM me. :)