You used the words barbarian which is Greek and Pleb which is latin when Iset was talking. Any way by the time rome was expanding Egypt was in control of the Ptolomey's who were Greek.

:) I still love this story! Good job!

Again; I trust none of your characters except for Nari. She seems legit :3

Oohh, I'm suspicious of all of these little guys in your story! It's like...I know somebody is lying, but I can't put my finger on who that is...Anyways, Kraos is weak, Iset is a manipulating bitch and Nari is just sad. Have I mentioned that this is REALLY GOOD?

Hello! I love this story! It's absolutely wonderful, so far. I commend you for all of your researching, and I'm wondering if Tor is from Rome...You know, because of Latium and all. Oh well, that was just a guess! Good work!

How many more chapters in this story? I just want to know do I can come back when the next book starts. Great story! It's really interesting. Definitely supports the suspense genre. :)

Another lovely chapter as always...please update soon!

Yay! you updated! I loved this chapter. :D keep on writing! :)

I like this twisting and turning, Iset's downward spiral was broken just before it got too depressing. And we got a glance at more of Tor's approach to local politics, hee hee! I also like the subtler, not in-your-face wickedness side of Panya, with the furniture shifting and all. And Nari shows a bit of spirit too, if only after Iset pulled her into it. A nice couple of chapters, all in all!

Thanks for this!

Oh, it looks like I should grab myself an update! Haven't I reviewed this chapter yet either?

I've been rather liking the development of Iset of late, as her position gets more unstable and we get to live in some horror besides all the frustrated self-overestimation and suchlike.

Thanks for this!

AHHH! Iset! Poison? UPDATE SOON? I love this story!

Aww...that was sweet. :)

I LOVE THIS STILL!

And i was surprised at Halima. She is scetchy...XD

Kraos shoulda punched a slave. XD

This is good. Long chapters. My stories don't have long chapters. My readers are suggesting that I make the chapters longer. I just stop them because I reach a cliff hanger. any suggestions? PM me. :)

Alex Rahsid