wow didnt even notice that it rhymed at first actually, very pretty and sad, i really love the last bit of it and being left on the lawn, i dunno, well done

wow... i can relate to this. something beautiful can be so short-lived. good poem

keep writing

This was beautiful and sad. I loved everything about it, and I could really sense your emotions. Probably because I really relate to this a lot. But mine seemed to be a winter love, and summer came all too soon. Great job on this, I enjoyed it.

Sad but an awesome job just the same. Thanks for the kind reviews. Write on.