I kinda like how you end at the kiss, so we're left to imagine what happens next. And you don't really hate her, because it's apparent she likes him so damn much and besides, it's a ridiculous time anyway. xD A wonderful oneshot, and I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:

aw how cute =)

Oh yay!

Wait, how is this a betrayal? Oh do you mean she was supposed to set him up with her friend? Or she gave herself away?

gulistanlik

U'know, I usually leave schathing reviews for cliched stories, but i really really enjoyed this oneshot -- the ending was always coming... but I loved the way it was finally broken. The construction was brilliant, nothing short of perfect, and the simple structure of the oneshot gave it incredible strength.

Congratulations on a great story.

--TheDJ

this is really good :)

This was pretty cute, but still amazingly cute. =D

Great story, even if it is only a short thing... It was a little cliched in parts but it was still good and it added to it in a way - you still made it your own with the detail about your characters and the way that they were with each other... I feel a little sorry for Alex... but then I think it was quite sweet for them two. Love is too complicated :P

i am floored. great.

Despite the cliches, I am a sucker for these kind of stories. And this was really great. I like the way your characters acted, which is great, cos people can relate to them.

Great story. Though I can't say I was happy that it stopped where it did, but it seemed like the perfect way to end it. Good job.

sweet, but not cheesy. Very well developed, in such a short story. Bravo! LOL

I liked it, but poor Alex. :)

bec

awee

cute ending

Wow, I really like it. The characters seem pretty well developed and even if it seemed a little cliche, I wanted to keep reading. I would enjoy reading more about these characters if you ever posted more. :)

Oh, and I love the last few lines. Ouch. XD