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| RynDevien 2007-04-15 ch 1,   | This poem is really good! Wow, deep thinking. I like your rhyming pattern. |
| Matthew James Current 2007-04-09 ch 1, | You have very good thoughts and ideas in your poetry. I think this one came out rather well! You do have some spirit in your work, some very deep and thought-provoking ideas. As far as experimenting in poetry, as a poet myself having been writing for 3 years I would say give it a shot. For simple experimentation, you have some definite potential here. In all your artistic endeavours remember to be true to yourself. You can do one thing better than anyone else in this world as an artist, and that is be yourself and speak from your soul. Your poetic voice is yours and yours alone. You can say things that no one else can. So take heart, find your gifts, and enjoy them! I am sure you have a bright future, so please keep writing ^_^ |
| say this sooner 2007-04-08 ch 1, | i really loved this. "we thrust ourselves inot the midst of revelations" is my favorite line, it's beautiful. i also loved the topic and the rhymes don't sound forced at all. nice job! |
| PocoSnow15 2007-04-08 ch 1, | This is very good for experimenting! You're right, life does go on. I loved the flow of this, how well everything fit together. Awesome job! |