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Reviews For: Mongratory Stryder

Milo Leorn
2007-05-18
ch 1,
I finished it! And I have to tell you, what an interesting way to end it. While it may have been influenced by the combined story, you did well with it. Morty died by a gunshot... Haha! :) Anyway, I like how everyone exploded back there. It was a good way to end it all without worrying of bugs and such. Haha. So, there, I finished it. I read it and am thinking of fanfics for Greenwater now... Though I might have to write something for this too! HAH.
Adra
2007-04-16
ch 1,
hm, i like it! it seems childish sometimes but i think that's what keeps it so real. and i love, love, LOVE the names you use. "Mitchlander" :P my good friend on another website has that as her penname.

wow, i feel really bad for not commenting well. so sorry! i've been busy and my grammer and word choice is slowly getting worse. so if any of my comments seem mean or anything, i'm so sry!! that's not my intention! i love your writing, you are very very inspiring!
SirScott
2007-04-09
ch 1,
That was pretty good. No body got the girl in the end. I really liked the concept of the bio-andoids.
Maybe, sometime you could write a sequel or prequel.

~SirScott
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