aww ..

>< sad

FINISHH!! xD

xx.

I noticed one small error: "By this time, people the comfort of the church’s..." That part doesn't make sense unless you add "had left" between "people" and "the".
Were those girls (Letti, Leah, kelly), friends of Minuet, because you didn't say.

We finally meet Jake; this will get really interesting.
~D@-c0nfu53d-1

Yeah, it is sad.
The summary caught my eye, but now I'm confused as to how you're going to write this considering that you've already started writing in Auberry's POV. Will the POV change with each chapter, or something?
Anyways, I'm looking forward to the first chapter.
~D@-c0nfu53d-1