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| Ephemeral Shock 2007-06-28 ch 4,  | abuseAwesome story! I'm so glad you updated! Do you write stories for If so, I wanna read your works over there too. |
| SatineSukuropio 2007-06-28 ch 4, | abuseits a sweet story update soon! |
| I'm the Evil Twin 2007-06-27 ch 4, | abuseit is a really good story...awesome actually! just make sure to not abandon it in some random corner. Good luck writing it and most importantly have fun writing it. |
| RoseRedSnowWhite 2007-06-27 ch 4, | abuseYAY FUDGE! I was so excited about chapter 4!! ^__6 I thought the new characters were interesting, and I can't wait for the thing about Deryn! Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what happens when they get to Cassian's house ! Not to mention what happens when Chelsea finds out Jereme is a guy!! FIGHT THE WRITERS BLOCK! I hate it, I know how you feel, and it SUCKS! T.T It's OK. I'll scream at cell phones noises, too. |
| RoseRedSnowWhite 2007-05-24 ch 3, | abuse-clears throat for long review to make Saia feel better- Gyaah! Sorry it took so long to notice that chap 3 was up, but I've been lazy! I haven't even done my homework, let alone write! Huh, i type my story. Too lazy to write it longhand. -yawns- About the chaptah...#O# What if Jereme really IS a serial killer?!?! And Aiden is his cute little accomplice to lure unsuspecting victims?!?! -gaspeth- Ooh, a mysterious past? Me like...Aiden is so cute! ^__^ Where did Jereme learn to play the violin? I hope Cassian didn't get snot all on his jacket. Snot sucks. Especially little kid snot. XP OK, all for now. Can't wait for chapter 4! |
| Esquirella 2007-05-17 ch 3, | abuseVery cool start! |
| Sundown 2007-05-17 ch 3, | abuseStill running along strongly. I like where this is heading, keep it up! |
| Sundown 2007-05-16 ch 1, | abuseI am intrigued...very nice beginning. I am very interested in seeing where this is going! |
| RoseRedSnowWhite 2007-05-15 ch 2, | abuseOoh, the same-thing-but-from-Jereme's-point-of-view-thing was cool! I like how you spell Jereme! Scandal, eh? AND serial killers? Gosh, you've got some of my favorite stuff in here! I can't wait for chapter 3!! ^.^ |
| RoseRedSnowWhite 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abuse^.^ I liked it very much. I'm a sucker for violins and pianos, so... Yeah, great job, keep going!! |
| Kai-san 2007-04-08 ch 2, | abuseEEK!! Adorabiible! You all ready know but I love it!! |