'OMG! That was so intense and unexpected. Brilliant idea. This is definitely good.

My squidy has a first name it's S-Q-U-I-D!

My squidy has a second name but it's just to damn obscene!

I just wanted to write this, review an say!

My squidy is my favourite, have a twinky - inky day!

Wow. That was definitely a shock. But it was really good! :)



Bubbly Girl

I was thinking that you could continue this...and then I read the end ! How horrible!...and yet wonderful at the same time

Man, that was intense and sinister. He's such a bastard, get's his needs fulfilled then kills. But I can't help but love this story.

Brilliant writing.

Oh my god...that was really creepy. But the plot was cool, and very different. :)

Wow who would have guessed that the title would become literal. The ending was so unexpected but still an excellent one-shot. Loved it.

the ending is so unexpected. i like it!

xoxo :)

Wow! I loved it. And yeah I know that's weird.. but it was Shocking. It was such a surprise.. I loved it. I'm tired of guessing what's going to happen and turning out to be right... so this really was amazing. It was written so well.. and um yeah.. you're unbelievably cool for writing it _

I dunno if this compliment actually suits.. cos of the topic you know... lol.. but anyhow.. I think you're writing is beautiful.. and you did a great job.

WOW i thought maybe they'd get together lol

Man I was wrong.

I like it- really well done.

wow Insane story, I loved it!

Oh, crap...horrible! Not your story...i mean the guy! Whew. Evil, evil guy.

It's really good. I like it. :D

OOH! I will never fall in love with a married man, and if I do, I will keep it to myself! :)

Creepy as hell, but I like your style- I got the idea from the start that he was going to be callous, but I never pictured that ending...

Nice.

Erisah