Oh my god...that was really creepy. But the plot was cool, and very different. :)

Wow who would have guessed that the title would become literal. The ending was so unexpected but still an excellent one-shot. Loved it.

the ending is so unexpected. i like it!
xoxo :)

Wow! I loved it. And yeah I know that's weird.. but it was Shocking. It was such a surprise.. I loved it. I'm tired of guessing what's going to happen and turning out to be right... so this really was amazing. It was written so well.. and um yeah.. you're unbelievably cool for writing it ^_^

I dunno if this compliment actually suits.. cos of the topic you know... lol.. but anyhow.. I think you're writing is beautiful.. and you did a great job.

WOW i thought maybe they'd get together lol
Man I was wrong.
I like it- really well done.

wow Insane story, I loved it!

Oh, crap...horrible! Not your story...i mean the guy! Whew. Evil, evil guy.

It's really good. I like it. :D

OOH! I will never fall in love with a married man, and if I do, I will keep it to myself!! :)

Creepy as hell, but I like your style- I got the idea from the start that he was going to be callous, but I never pictured that ending...
Nice.
Erisah

i loved your ending, because it was original and i didn't expect it at all. =)

Oh darling, this story was perfectly delicious!

The title alone was what catch my attention, and from there on out, things only got better. Uniquely and articulately written, gruesome plot, and utterly wonderful!

Kudos dear.

I like it. It's very Robert Browning "Porphiria's Lover".

I liked it. Really cool concept. I would have prefered it if you had broken up his explanation a bit instead of having it all together. And I think it would have been more powerful if yiu ended it with the line, "You never should have said 'I love you'". But good story nonetheless. Very creepy XD. I hope you write more soon--none of this multiple month break stuff. I miss your stuff!

Hope things get less hectic. :)

Lovely. Can you do a one where his wife finds out. Would love to see what happens then.

Keep writing...