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| isabella atlantis 2007-04-08 ch 1,  | abusehello klunderbunker, this is isabella atlantis. just want to say- this poem/story is pretty good. i like writing poems too, and i find what helps when writing poems is to not follow the same tone of voice. the best poems dont have the "duh duh duh, duh duh" kind of sound. read your poem/story out loud and see how it sounds. unless you want it to sound that way.. but yeah! alrighties thanks |