I like this.. it flows well.. and I like the tone a lot... great piece

Wow. If this were made into a song, it would stay on the charts for weeks. No kidding. It's so honest, so deep, yet so clear.

this made me smile. not by the end, but from the very beginning.

i love the way you phrased things and how very relatable all of it is. perfect.

sad but cute and endearing

like the slight rhyming in this.. subtle ad it adds to the mood and feeling of the poem

wonderful job :)

Very cute, relatable. I liked this a lot. I loved the last sentence. Great job.