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| Erisah Mae 2007-09-14 ch 1,  | abuseChillingly grotesque. The fragmented form of this story echoes the sociopathic mind of the main character, and the bleak tone, with the ticking clock thematic running throughout and tying the different sections together was a great idea! I love the realism and the descriptions. Nice. Erisah Mae P.S. I'd love it if you could read/review some of my work. |