i am...speechless. i always admire how writers like you can express themselves so well. if a picture can paint a thousand words, this piece can paint a thousand sorrows.
=summerdazed=

A very interesting and well crafted story. It's an accurate, and human portrayal, a snapshot in the life of two people.

I have to say this piece stands out to me as describing a normally very charged and and traumatic event in a very soft, thoughtful, and human fashion. Nicely done indeed.