   goonlaalgoon 2008-09-24 . chapter 14Yay! He made it back.
Great story. |
 Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 . chapter 14fantastic story! i would've liked to read about the fight with the redders but still very cool! |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 . chapter 13 oh dear, thats not good at all...i hope they get to hope (:p) before he passes out...but then he is annoyingly strong willed ;) |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 . chapter 12 wow, taka's really showing his strength now! very exciting! |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 . chapter 11 oh exciting! get to see them in a real battle! should be good! |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 . chapter 10 great chapter. the way you describe the fights are great, so easy to follow but yet descriptive! great! fran ~*~ |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 . chapter 9 very good. the language of communication is really interesting. great idea. Taka's character is really well developed and interesting! |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 . chapter 8 fantastic! very exciting! great character really well developed! i really love you're writing style! can't stop reading this! :D fran ~*~ |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 . chapter 7 this is really fantastic writing! really enjoying it! |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 . chapter 6 very exciting chapter. really enjoying this! |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 . chapter 5 ooh very exciting! great atmosphere in you're story, really well written! |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 . chapter 4 very good! interesting to see how he is developing |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 . chapter 3 great chapter, good to find out a little more of his past! |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 . chapter 2 ooh really great chapter! the plot is coming no really well and im very intrigued! |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 . chapter 1 great beginning! great characters and setting up of the plot! |
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