yay. That was a really cute little story. i loved it. Taka was awesome. I love the other characters too!

well another story no not so this story has moor written in it it will leve you wanting more of clifs adventures read at your own risk . this story is a stand alone that is well written has great story flow and a great intertainment for you the reader so get reading it worth your time

Yay! He made it back.

Great story.

fantastic story! i would've liked to read about the fight with the redders but still very cool!

oh dear, thats not good at all...i hope they get to hope (:p) before he passes out...but then he is annoyingly strong willed ;)

wow, taka's really showing his strength now! very exciting!

oh exciting! get to see them in a real battle! should be good!

great chapter. the way you describe the fights are great, so easy to follow but yet descriptive! great! fran *

very good. the language of communication is really interesting. great idea. Taka's character is really well developed and interesting!

fantastic! very exciting! great character really well developed! i really love you're writing style! can't stop reading this! :D fran *

this is really fantastic writing! really enjoying it!

very exciting chapter. really enjoying this!

ooh very exciting! great atmosphere in you're story, really well written!

very good! interesting to see how he is developing

great chapter, good to find out a little more of his past!